Today Mrs Taaffe came in a Milkyway and confessed that she stole the chocolate and took the HDMI cable. She was one of your suspects because she had her fingerprints all over the scene, She uses an HDMI cable, she uses a scrunchie very often, she likes mini chocolate and she was at school on Saturday the 10th of October. She came in and we showed her the evidence that we then we showed her then she confessed that she did the crime.
Hi, my name is Jessica.I'm a year 6 and I'm in the homeroom Fred the moth
Well done next time you might need to prof read your sentence but other than that well done you explained it really well. Ka Rawe
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